Comments on: Dirty Little Slut

By: TH

TH — Sun, 28 Nov 2010 12:16:10 +0000

You don’t like that no matter what story components are chosen, they all end up with marriage somehow? :)

kieran mahoney — Fri, 26 Nov 2010 11:58:47 +0000

im horny

stephen lavelle — Fri, 29 Oct 2010 08:49:03 +0000

Not too long, though it was very tedious.

Eric S — Mon, 25 Oct 2010 00:05:07 +0000

Wow! How long did that take to create?

stephen lavelle — Thu, 14 Oct 2010 20:54:38 +0000

“Something tells me this is not how it should be.”
It’s intentional –

There’re a number of typos and editing problems – mismatching brackets are really only the beginning of them :P

agj — Thu, 14 Oct 2010 18:39:28 +0000

Why does the previous text somehow change after one makes a selection? Something tells me this is not how it should be.

Detail: Notice the curly brace:

“Heroine takes service in king’s castle. She is so poor that she wears a wooden petticoat (stakk}.”

agj — Thu, 14 Oct 2010 07:05:45 +0000

Oh fuck you finished it and… Well, I’ll play it tomorrow, it’s awfully late right now.

djp — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 22:29:15 +0000

With all the disney shit around anymore, it’s nice to be reminded of how disturbing these fairy tales originally were.

Noyb — Wed, 13 Oct 2010 21:18:25 +0000

An experiment in decomposing fables into basic narrative blocks?

It’s rather jarring when some of the choices replace the story so far with entirely new text instead of building off what’s already there.